Stuck...Simple iRule? Not sure...req for Help

what about something like this?

 config

root@(ve11a)(cfg-sync In Sync)(Active)(/Common)(tmos) list ltm virtual bar
ltm virtual bar {
    destination 172.28.24.10:80
    ip-protocol tcp
    mask 255.255.255.255
    pool foo
    profiles {
        tcp { }
    }
    rules {
        myrule
    }
    source 0.0.0.0/0
    source-address-translation {
        type automap
    }
    vs-index 2
}
root@(ve11a)(cfg-sync In Sync)(Active)(/Common)(tmos) list ltm pool foo
ltm pool foo {
    members {
        200.200.200.101:80 {
            address 200.200.200.101
        }
        200.200.200.111:80 {
            address 200.200.200.111
        }
    }
}
root@(ve11a)(cfg-sync In Sync)(Active)(/Common)(tmos) list ltm rule myrule
ltm rule myrule {
    when CLIENT_DATA {
  if { [TCP::payload] contains [IP::local_addr] } {
    set newpayload [string map "[IP::local_addr] [LB::server addr]" [TCP::payload]]
    TCP::payload replace 0 [TCP::payload length] ""
    TCP::payload replace 0 0 $newpayload
  }
  TCP::release
  TCP::collect
}
when LB_SELECTED {
  TCP::collect
}
}

 trace

[root@ve11a:Active:In Sync] config  ssldump -Aed -nni 0.0 port 80
New TCP connection 1: 172.28.24.1(36926) <-> 172.28.24.10(80)
1391605062.9816 (0.0018)  C>S
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GET / HTTP/1.1
User-Agent: curl/7.15.5 (i686-redhat-linux-gnu) libcurl/7.15.5 OpenSSL/0.9.8b zlib/1.2.3 libidn/0.6.5
Host: 172.28.24.10
Accept: */*

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New TCP connection 2: 200.200.200.14(36926) <-> 200.200.200.101(80)
1391605062.9837 (0.0015)  C>S
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GET / HTTP/1.1
User-Agent: curl/7.15.5 (i686-redhat-linux-gnu) libcurl/7.15.5 OpenSSL/0.9.8b zlib/1.2.3 libidn/0.6.5
Host: 200.200.200.101
Accept: */*

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